Vo jo mere saath rahti hai...

Rah rah kar jo udti hai, aasmano pe chadti hai
Parinda ban machalti hai, khayaalo se panapti hai

Gazal ban ke nikalti hai, raaho mein gun gunati hai

Do bund aansuo ko pi kar hi, mast ho ke itraati hai
Na mile mohabbat to na sahi, gumo ke sang mandhraati hai

Shyaam hote hi khilti hai, subah ke saath dhalti hai

Ek khoobsurat tanhayi jo mere saath rahti hai...

 

aapki tanhayi achi hai
lekin aap isse bhi acha likh sakte ho..


good choice of words though

 

wah wah bhai baat hai

 

thanks guys for reading it!!!

 

hey were u inspired by the song
Teri chaahat jo mere sath saath chalti hai
bas yahi baat zamane ko buri lagti hai...

 

ruk ruk kar mujhe chhedti rehti hai
main rooth jau to mujhe manati hai

kabhi dushman to kabhi hamsafar lagti hai

akela na par jau kabhi iska khayal rakhti hai
kabhi kabhi chup chap baith kar mujhe dekhti rehti hai

kabhi us se nafrat hoti hai, to kabhi bohot pyari lagti hai

Ek khoobsurat tanhayi jo mere saath rahti hai...

beautiful thots....

 

Better lonely than in bad fellowship...hai na ? Amit Ji !

Acha likha hai aap ne...!

Amanush...

 

reading these lyrics for the first time...

 

yes..nicely expressed..read ur poem first time could've been any longer? like a verse or two

 

thanks buddies...vini, amanush, garima, madhuresh and bubbly for reading it and appreciating it!!!!

 

very well rhyming and very nice thoughts..