Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by i'm_not_neo, Nov 24, 2006.

  1. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Actually I was thinking of naming it "Oh Vernica"..... anyways,again a simple poem..but it felt more like a song.I hope you like the poem and if you don't sorry to hog the poetry forum with yet another disaster.

    It was a typical story
    all the way;
    the same 'ol
    I love her
    she doesn't know me.

    Before long,we went
    Our Seperate ways,
    (me rather reluctantly)
    But she didn't care
    And I kept hoping she'd be with me.

    Oh Vernica,look what you did
    you broke my heart
    took away my dreams
    My belief in love
    has now been buried.

    I guess in a way
    I was forced to believe
    in destiny.
    that it wasn't me
    that you and I were just weren't
    meant to be.

    Oh Vernica,look what you did
    I never believed in destiny,
    I had always been an atheist
    Yet somehow
    you make me feel like a priest.

    I can see clearly now,
    it really wasn't meant to be.
    I neglected my duties then,
    I had to pay a bitter price
    and I didn't even care then.
    But now I know the value of time,
    the value of sincerity,
    and so I sing with,
    All the love and fidelity,

    Oh Vernica,look what you've done,
    You've made me virtuos,
    Made me a hard-worker.
    In your memories now,
    I don't even shed a tear,
    And eventhough
    You don't even know me,
    Oh Vernica,you are my saviour.
    born2tab likes this.
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    dude...u remind me, so much of me couple of months ago...

    I know where this all is coming from.

    kool stuff
  3. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    mil ja gale mere bhai....:beer: ...mind if i take your lyrics for my song...
    even if you say no..reps coming ya way:p:
  4. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    That was a relief...I thought this poem had like 20 or 25 views but no replies and I was like "was I the only one who went through this..".
    Its good to know I'm not alone.
    Only some1 who really went through this could really appreciate this poem.
  5. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    thanx for just replying let alone the reps...means a lot when some1 appreciates your work..
    And yeah of course you can use the poem for your song,hope it turns out great.
    Thanx for the reps again....

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