Actually I was thinking of naming it "Oh Vernica"..... anyways,again a simple poem..but it felt more like a song.I hope you like the poem and if you don't sorry to hog the poetry forum with yet another disaster. It was a typical story all the way; the same 'ol I love her she doesn't know me. Before long,we went Our Seperate ways, (me rather reluctantly) But she didn't care And I kept hoping she'd be with me. Oh Vernica,look what you did you broke my heart took away my dreams My belief in love has now been buried. I guess in a way I was forced to believe in destiny. that it wasn't me that you and I were just weren't meant to be. Oh Vernica,look what you did I never believed in destiny, I had always been an atheist Yet somehow you make me feel like a priest. I can see clearly now, it really wasn't meant to be. I neglected my duties then, I had to pay a bitter price and I didn't even care then. But now I know the value of time, the value of sincerity, and so I sing with, All the love and fidelity, Oh Vernica,look what you've done, You've made me virtuos, Made me a hard-worker. In your memories now, I don't even shed a tear, And eventhough You don't even know me, Oh Vernica,you are my saviour.
dude...u remind me, so much of me couple of months ago... I know where this all is coming from. kool stuff
mil ja gale mere bhai....:beer: ...mind if i take your lyrics for my song... even if you say no..reps coming ya way:
@walk_alone That was a relief...I thought this poem had like 20 or 25 views but no replies and I was like "was I the only one who went through this..". Its good to know I'm not alone. Only some1 who really went through this could really appreciate this poem.
@born2tab.. thanx for just replying let alone the reps...means a lot when some1 appreciates your work.. And yeah of course you can use the poem for your song,hope it turns out great. Thanx for the reps again....