I don't know what to say.It's my first poem here and AI'm semi nervous that its silly, semi nervous its stupid...I guess there must be all poets in this forum so plz recommend any changes.... Dekhar hi usse Milta tha sukoon Pyaar ka jo Sar par chad gaya tha junoon Ajeeb pyaar tha woh Har pal Bhagwan say yahi maangta tha Saath mere n ho toh bhi Woh khush rahe yahi chahta tha. Is hi bar Bhagwan ne sun li meri Fir bhi koi sheekhwa nahi Uski yadon mein Akele asoon pi liye maine Lekin aaj bhi yahi maanga iss dil ne Woh jaha bhi hon khush rahe Kismat mein likha ho to jaroor milegi Pyaar sachcha ho to jaroor milegi Tab tak is dil ki har dhadkan tere khushiyon ke liye duaan karegi.
Wah ustaad wah...to aapko bhi is poem ke keede ne kaat liya..n e way original and nice one...was it really from the heart...i mean really misin someone:think:
@born2tab...yeah that one is indeed my sad love story...thank you for appreciating the poem though.. @rocker_vish...thank you, too...hope you get over the heartbreak.