Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by browneyegurlie, Apr 11, 2005.

  1. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    A wrong child,
    left penniless.
    A small victory ray stolen.
    They walk forward,
    only to step back insulted.
    Nameless child wandering,
    tears of acid bearing.
    Holding hand out for the silk curtain.
    A small oasis,
    an illusion?
    Any effort seen with raised brows.
    A gentle act counted as murder,
    and every punishment suffered.
    A soul so transparent,
    yet seen as black water.
    They run,
    far into the darkness.
    Hide and seek is losing its fun.
    The aim of the game lost,
    as the girl searching.
    Small desires of warmth,
    counted as demands of fire.
    Only to turn her to ashes
  2. sayanakaharry

    sayanakaharry Forum Leader

    nice work.
  3. skaw

    skaw snooze

    so much meaning behind such common words .. gud job .. like always
  4. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    gurlie is such an aseet to this forum. good job as always
  5. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    thank you.......

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