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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by raj_aryan, Feb 1, 2005.

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  1. raj_aryan

    raj_aryan Moderator

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    Who listened all those times, when you were feeling low?
    Who sat beside you in rough times and helped you where to go?
    Who cried when you cried, and helped away the tears?
    Who tried to stay next to you, and help you with your fears?
    Did you forget, That I gave you my heart?
    After you left, My whole world came apart.
    Did you forget, all those nights we had?
    And all those times you said you loved me, now it makes me sad.
    Did you forget, when you called I was there?
    I always helped, when you were in despare.
    Well I remember all those times I made sure you were ok.
    Cause if I get to see you smile once, it will be a better day.
    You are now gone, but the memories still last.
    It is hard to put the ones away with love, thats in the past.
    But you can still call, I will still be there.
    It will still be like before, I will always care.
    And remember it wise, or you will regret.
    Because I will always be there for you, or did you forget?
     
  2. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    hey man nice poem...liked it a lot:) oh by the way i think its despair...
     
  3. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    cool one raj... nice work... really loved it
     
  4. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    You have rhymed it really well without making it too obvious, just the way to write a poem, i say...
     
  5. skaw

    skaw snooze

    great stuff ... u ll go long way :p: ..
     
  6. raj_aryan

    raj_aryan Moderator

    thnks to all of u..
     
  7. atthanii

    atthanii Theif Slayer

    yo raj, are u for real dude....OMG....hahahahahahahahah...****in stop stealin other people's work dude....good god......here is ma proof.... and da source ofcourse.
    http://www.ojar.com/view_6765.htm

    another poem I like

    another poem I like here.lvaughn24: by T@(0

    Who listened all those times, when you were feeling low?
    Who sat beside you in rough times and helped you where to go?
    Who cried when you cried, and helped away the tears?
    Who tried to stay next to you, and help you with your fears?
    Did you forget, That I gave you my heart?
    After you left, My whole world came apart.
    Did you forget, all those nights we had?
    And all those times you said you loved me, now it makes me sad.
    Did you forget, when you called I was there?
    I always helped, when you were in despare.
    Well I remember all those times I made sure you were ok.
    Cause if I get to see you smile once, it will be a better day.
    You are now gone, but the memories still last.
    It is hard to put the ones away with love, thats in the past.
    But you can still call, I will still be there.
    It will still be like before, I will always care.
    And remember it wise, or you will regret.
    Because I will always be there for you, or did you forget?
     
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  8. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    was thinkin of reppin raj..

    i think i'l rep athanni instd :)
     
  9. atthanii

    atthanii Theif Slayer

    not just this check out the other poems posted by raj and den take a look at ma comments...heheheheheh
     
  10. G. Srinivas

    G. Srinivas New Member

    Good work man, keep it up. Life is a mixture of joy and sorrow, hoping this time a joyous one from u.
     
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