Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhay_saxena, May 24, 2006.

  1. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    Hey guys,

    Here's a song I wrote:

    Coming back to my home,
    Its where I long to be,
    I won't say I miss you,
    But I know thats just me.

    It took me years to find,
    that twinkle of the eye,
    It was that pretty evening,
    Why did I have to buy ?

    I got you the stars of the sky !
    but you could'nt take 'em,
    I know its hard to find,
    But is it already taken,

    My words don't mean anything,
    I think its the way I say it,
    I think life is such,
    I think I think too much !
    vini likes this.
  2. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    seen u after a long time on igt...anyways... u can write well..
    very deep n meaningful!!...

  3. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    thanks vini. Nice to be back !
  4. #iR@


    nice stuff....
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one.........
  6. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice work dude. Simplicity is your facet.
  7. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    I think your thinking must be thining in good lines...:)...good one...
  8. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    Thanks all of you !
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  9. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    nice....u shud record it man....i have some petty competition now in song writing:eek:: :p:
    reps upcoming...hey btw - can u teach me to write like that?
  10. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    hey man, I am sure trying to record it.. But the place I am stuck currently only has a windows sound recorder which is not very good to record as u might know!
    will record it and post as soon as possible !

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