Yeh pyar nahi to kya hai??? A short one aftr a long time :grin:...cudnt think of a title : agar koi achcha Title dimag me aye toh batana pls : Raat si andheri hai yeh zindgi par ek umeed ka tara nazar aata hai tum or tumhari yeh saadgi ek yahi andaaz toh is dil ko bhaata hai mera tujhe dekhna or fir dekhte reh jana yeh pyar nahi to or kya hai tera mujhe dekhna or fir anjaan ban jana yeh ada nahi to or kya hai ----by Me Teri ik nazar bhar ko tarasta hun , jo mil jaati hai agar toh shaam roshan ho jaati hai aur na mile jis din teri jhalak, palak se aansoo behte hai aur wohi shaam gamgeen ho jati hai tu samjhe na samjhe is nazar ki muhabbat ko magar yeh nazar tere asar se hi noor paati hai.... ----by koolstrum Tera mujhe dekh ke yun palkein jhukana.. Bina kuch kahe bahut kuch keh jaana.. Tere khule baaalon ko yun dekhte reh jaana.. Dil mein bhare armanon ko bas chupa jana.. Mere dil tu hi baata... Yeh pyar nahi to kya hai.. Ankhen band karta hun..to tuhi-tu nazar aati hai.. Ankhen kholun to tu saamne aa jati hai.. Tere lavon ka chupke se mujhe chu jaana.. Paas mere aake tera dheere se muskurana.. Mere dil tu hi baata.. Yeh Pyar nahi to kya hai... -----by Vishwa Do comment...good,bad or ugly?
hey garima its really a nice one... and as far as the title is concerned i dont think anyone can suggest better than u... plz try to add some more lines in it .... if u can m sure when u add some more lines in it u will definately ve one title for this poem again no need to appriciate ur work coz U R THE BEST..... abhi
Teri ik nazar bhar ko tarasta hun , jo mil jaati hai agar toh shaam roshan ho jaati hai aur na mile jis din teri jhalak, palak se aansoo behte hai aur wohi shaam gamgeen ho jati hai tu samjhe na samjhe is nazar ki muhabbat ko magar yeh nazar tere asar se hi noor paati hai.......
when u have a secret crush on someone... when ur somebody's secret admirer...... this one fits perfectly it's really cute
lol secret admiration .... i am sure garry doesnt has any such case .. do you garry? .. lol .. half of the world knows by now .. anyway nice poem .. and guess what? .. i know all the words .. yay!! i like the fact that it isnt dark .. and very light hearted .. reps to you buddy!
@Trish thanks.... ^^^@yeah Shak u r rite.....when i like some1 the whole world knows bout it.....a lil late : aftr 7 yrs to b precise :....& this time m sure i wont let the person kno that i like him...if in case i start liking some1 else(i thnk i hv
Good one Garru.. but.. a bit short.. so thought to add a few lines to it.. let me know if u liked it.. These are the lines told by the GUY: Tera mujhe dekh ke yun palkein jhukana.. Bina kuch kahe bahut kuch keh jaana.. Tere khule baaalon ko yun dekhte reh jaana.. Dil mein bhare armanon ko bas chupa jana.. Mere dil tu hi baata... Yeh pyar nahi to kya hai.. Ankhen band karta hun..to tuhi-tu nazar aati hai.. Ankhen kholun to tu saamne aa jati hai.. Tere lavon ka chupke se mujhe chu jaana.. Paas mere aake tera dheere se muskurana.. Mere dil tu hi baata.. Yeh Pyar nahi to kya hai... and title may be : Pyar nahi to kya hai... Vishwa
Thanku... thanku... huh !!!! i m now feeling proud of myself.. i m ready to beat javed akhtar.. n gulzar...