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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by esgallindeion, Jul 30, 2005.

  1. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Where's the hand that was promised me?
    To lift me up from the lowest grounds.
    Stumbling along my weakened knees,
    I rue the loss of a friend I'd found.
    Recalling tales of a long gone past
    In which I, a Knight, had many a quest
    Of war, peace and glory surpassed
    Accomplished all, excepting one little test.
    Oh, heavens, why this mockery made of me?
    My deeds were ever an honour on you
    Servile, Oh Goddess, my prayer to thee
    Why left unanswered in the winds you blew.
    Fey, now my thoughts, as the wind ululates
    In a pastiche of wolves howling in wrath,
    This raffish being that I'm decreed by fate
    Averring my way through this muddy path.
    And yet, eyes closed, I still dream in glee
    Of nascent thoughts and that which could be
    And with a penchant to what you shan't give
    I fear to wake up, and I fear to live.
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    This poem is purposely left untitled and with time I may add more to it, in which case the name would not be suited.
     
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  2. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    gud work
    indeed!!
     
  3. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    Essi my man......you back :):):)
    coz the date its 30-07-05 on the post.........
    if u r...good to have you back...........
    and the poem is like totaly.whoa........great ..waiting for additons
     
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Ooohh Essi, you know I'm a fan, but this was something. I loved it. And man, I had to look up a few words there. Great work. Post more often and help!! I can't get anything out, its been ages since I wrote anything. Nothing seems to work out.
     
  5. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    oh mmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaan!is he the essi mod that was talked bout?!i know him by his real id not essi!
     
  6. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Hehe yeah. He is the Essi, everyone keeps mentioning.
     
  7. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    well if hes still on igt then why isnt he a mod?!
     
  8. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Such a nice poem!............
     
  9. tejas

    tejas ..........

    @rocking_devil - He isnt really on IGT. He just logs in once in awhile and posts poems, thats about it. If he was on IGT, he would definitely be a mod.
     
  10. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    u do?? :think:
     
  11. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    whoa ... an ex-mod ... wow ...

    y dont ya post more of your stuff ... that seemed realy pro stuff?
     

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