Untitled song

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by b-gin, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. b-gin

    b-gin New Member

    Hey all,
    This is a rough draft for a song I just came up with out of the blue (Will revise shortly) :

    Verse 1

    The hands on the clock pound nails into my head
    As people conversate about things better left unsaid
    The light at the end of the tunnel fades away
    With no room to play, my mind goes a-stray


    Chorus

    And I'm lost inside myself again, so I stop and look around
    Without misfortune many treasures would never be found
    When life loses its color and starts to get me down
    I paint a perfect picture and forget to frown


    Verse 2

    Every single vessel worthy of sailing
    Leaves the dock that rests aside my dreams
    Turning my demise into peace of mind
    Gliding towards the land of destiny it seems

    Chorus

    So when I'm lost inside myself, I stop and look around
    Without misfortune many treasures would never be found
    When life loses its color and starts to get me down
    I paint a perfect picture and forget to frown
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    ........
    (Outro)Problems will get smaller the farther you are from the ground
     
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  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Loved it :)
    Great expression and use of words.


    *wonders why she can never write so beautifylly *
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^For starters, you can work on your spelling "beautifylly" :grin:
    @b-gin, very professionally written, have you written this song on the guitar as well? If so, RECORD and post ASAP.
     
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    yea luks like u have composed it on guitar.....song is great ...hav u written it urself....lets hear it sometime.
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ya sing and record....but even this way its good ...
    "And I'm lost inside myself again, so I stop and look around" accha hai !!
     
  6. rohailsak

    rohailsak New Member

    very nice and deep ....
     
  7. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    :shock: Wow
    great song


    I thinj the title should be............. all alone
     
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    It's always a pleasure to read your lyrics, they're simply amazing...

    Like everyone else, I'm also curious to hear the song :)
     

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