Hey all, This is a rough draft for a song I just came up with out of the blue (Will revise shortly) : Verse 1 The hands on the clock pound nails into my head As people conversate about things better left unsaid The light at the end of the tunnel fades away With no room to play, my mind goes a-stray Chorus And I'm lost inside myself again, so I stop and look around Without misfortune many treasures would never be found When life loses its color and starts to get me down I paint a perfect picture and forget to frown Verse 2 Every single vessel worthy of sailing Leaves the dock that rests aside my dreams Turning my demise into peace of mind Gliding towards the land of destiny it seems Chorus So when I'm lost inside myself, I stop and look around Without misfortune many treasures would never be found When life loses its color and starts to get me down I paint a perfect picture and forget to frown ........ ........ ........ ........ (Outro)Problems will get smaller the farther you are from the ground
^For starters, you can work on your spelling "beautifylly" :grin: @b-gin, very professionally written, have you written this song on the guitar as well? If so, RECORD and post ASAP.
yea luks like u have composed it on guitar.....song is great ...hav u written it urself....lets hear it sometime.
ya sing and record....but even this way its good ... "And I'm lost inside myself again, so I stop and look around" accha hai !!
It's always a pleasure to read your lyrics, they're simply amazing... Like everyone else, I'm also curious to hear the song