My First Post Here...... STANDING APPLAUSE/HIDDEN DEVILS Come out, Come out Where ever you are Come from your mansions and shiny new cars Come look at the death And destruction you caused Did you really think you’d get standing applause? Did you do it for glory? Did you do it for fame? Or did you really wish people would spit at your name? Do you think you are clever? Do you think you are just? Or do you really think others are lower than dust? You give children guns And tell them to shoot And you laugh as you look on in your clean-cut suit Are you afraid to fight? Are you afraid to die? Have you ever seen war with your own two eyes? You say they play dirty Cheating at your game But who’s there to call out when you do the same? You kick them down And you laugh as they fall Come out, Come out Where ever you are Come from your mansions and shiny new cars Come look at the death And destruction you caused Did you really think you’d get standing applause? Andy
well a brilliant poem there..lemme rattle my grey cells for the title:- ~ The curse of Opulents ~ Who needs your glory ~ Cold/Callous Nobility thats all i can come up wid..will post if anything else strikes me reps for u!
Nice work Andy......it reminds me of my poem 'To A Killer....' that I wrote few months back....reps coming ur way from me too :beer: ...enjoy Title...??? m bad at it too...:
Excellent.. I liked it... somehow it reminds me of James Blunt lyrics, only much better... But him singing it would give the right emotional touch. Titles? I suck at titles too. But anyway, how about - 1. New World Performance 2. Is This Your Stage / Are you standing onstage 3. Come Out ... ;P
Suggestions:- Let the Curtain fall Behind the Scene.. Master of Puppets.. nice poem..and it did remind me of something similar i've read before
awesome work yaar.........for titles, i suck big time too......anyway, i hope suggestions wouldn't hurt as well... :dance: ...... 1)Realize to rescue! 2)Diminishing Glory 3)The cursed nobility.....
GREATTTTT!!!!!! veryy nicely ritten! reps comming ur way man! :beer: i think u should name it: "hidden devils"
hey the lines ... Come out, Come out Where ever you are reminds me of this movie Queen of the damned ... My frnd likes those lines alot and keeps repeating them ....