-Untimely Life-

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Mar 2, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    World is a weird place..
    people are weirder dude!

    wont comment on death..
    its a whole topic by itself....:)
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    abhi ye mat kehna taht u died in an accident last year and its ur ghost posting all this......RAAt hoo rahi hai aur muje darr laga raha hai....
     
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    LOL....Darna mana hai
     
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    *sigh*
    i wouldnt mind some more comments...
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    aree ladki kitan footage khaayegi......:)...
     
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    -The Awakening-

    -The Awakening-

    Though etched on its tombstone
    the being believed it wasnt true
    masking its face it woke anew
    red angels flew past sniggering
    echoing in the emptiness it was lingering
    earth had nurtured the corpse corosively
    its skin stiffened and livened up
    following a path strewen with primroses
    aimlessly walking seeing the sky changing
    prinking itself clear it changed its color
    the sinuos road showed an end not far
    the air brought sounds
    a lute was heard playing faraway
    the music grew as it advanced through
    stopping at a closure the vibrations were out loud
    it arrived at its own requiem dumbfound

    ---`-,--;--<@


    you can call this a sequel to "Untimely Life"
    still a bit raw
    do comment anwy
     

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