Unintentional

I know my poems are getting a bit monotonous,but I can't help it.
This is a simple poem,just managed to rhyme the words,but the poem feels right for some reason..


Unintentional

Still remember how we first met
To the day we had
Our first date
It was love no doubt
but I didn't know
when the passion went out
We ended up battling
quarreling and fighting.

Darling,I was stupid
Forgive me for whatever I did
the love we had was sensational
give me another chance
because it was all so unintentional.

I can't stand this lonliness,
take my hand,
take me back to happiness.
Though hard it may be for you,
to forget what I said to you,
I just want you to know,
my love for you is so very true.

So here I am,alone in pain,
hoping my apologies
don't go in vain.
I'm wishing time was reversible,
b'coz believe me ,my love,
it was unintentional.

 

The poem too feels unintentional :

Well, its a good pome

 

wow... now dat was something i enjoyed reading... but i felt that some of the lines contradicting (but who cares) nice poem!

 

Which lines are contradicting?
(edited the last 2 lines,guess I used a wrong conjunction earlier)

 

liked it

reps for ya

 

@arnold_aj....hoping your remark was unintentional....

 

aree ye bhikhari vala style hia ... those old hindi songs like "ehsaan tera hoga mujh par dil.....bla bla bla.."...lol
par sahi hai the poem is nice
reps added

 

thanks for the reps madhuresh and spy_game...

 

Hehe ure work was good

Reps later..repped ya b4 this.

 

Reps or no reps,thanx for appreciating my work.

 

thank you,vini and arnold_aj for the reps....