Unfold my past...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by silent_dragon, Mar 8, 2005.

  1. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    here is one of my many poems describing my past.

    When through the woods, I crossed the mountains.
    The waters, the birds, my will and my hatred
    brought me to where I really ought to be...

    And when I reached my destiny, never to
    turn back and look once, I regret.
    Then I asked him where is the truth.
    Neither did words fell nor did understanding grow...

    I took my ground and he asked me to
    see the state in which I took to,
    the pain in which I live.
    I could not bear it, neither could he for
    he to felt it in me.

    To overcome I knew not, thence he travelled into my mind
    and brought something i had lost.As i stood there sad and forlon,
    he gave it to me. It was that which many felt and few saw.

    It was my faithful, my sword.
    My precious, my all. Once again I touched it,
    after long weary nights. I cried, Yes, indeed I did.
    I drew it out of its slumber, my sword in all its glory.

    My fingers then remembered my old strength.
    Dark were my dreams of late, but now, I am filled with light.
    And he commanded me to grasp my sword, never to let it go

    Through this, now I have become, what I have and in my
    future I hold forth my Blade.......
    Silent Dragon

    hope u liked it.
  2. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    WOW!!!.. some more of these and reps will b coming ur way!
  3. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    tanx dude!!!!
  4. rev

    rev New Member

    Anthomorphising a fictional character....eh? Whatever you did dude it's good. YOu have avery wonderful style of poetry that even without metre, rhyme, or anything....the words seem to flow. Keep posting!
  5. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    coool man, havent seen any poems like these from ya for long time!

    btw....what ever happened to you these days that you aint appearing in igt! any aftermath of da gangfight???

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