hi a bit off- bit again..comments plz controlled the sobbing hold my faith dad left us saw the horror of mom getting blazed in prayer room watched my mom burnt body charred totally,helplessly she looks differnt in that white robe so serious when tied to legs and hand not allowed to take a final glimpse hold my wailing thought what will world say if i show my tears... love died in arms of mine, taking the dreams with her... suicide again ....tormented me screaming was no option scars has to heal one day thought moved ahead i never cried walked where dead bodies lying feel they are smiling on me.. for missing the chance to show the world i have heart too.... the heart that can cry for the person u adore rohit astroguru26
death is the greatest sorrow on the earth.. i lost my few loved ones too recently.... hurts like hell!! rohit u write too much bout pain.....
hmm.. i wish you didnt make so many gawdamn grammatical mistakes coz other than that, i love the poem....
Deep man!! Real nice. Gloomy and emotional. Love this stuff. Hits u hard in the guts..not like the lovey dovey stuff You keep this up, rohit!! :rock: @ nimisha: Im terribly sorry for your loss. Just lost someone a couple of days ago as well. Something inside you dies with them. Hope you feel better soon!
Not to be insensitive or emo but....I've always believed that something of them lives on with me. Think about it....a habit you might have picked up or some way that they have influenced or shaped you will always remind you of them. e.g.- I do not smoke, drink or do drugs because a friend of mine who did lives on in me.
@nimi..........death is the biggest truth of life.......we cannot escape the reality..we have to loose our dearones one day.....life has its rule and we are just followers of our destiny @cryptic_angel......the mistakes makes us to learn and i feel nice to acknowledge my mistakes.. @petunia...my imagination stops on the lovey-dovey type..death/sadness.hoplessness comes natural for me....may be mine tends to be inclined to those philosophical syndrome thanks to all for nice comments........ rohit astroguru26
That is commendable..really. I would really have been proud of you had u been my friend... You rock!!! ~*~
