Unchaste Serenade

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Mar 31, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Here's what can be described as a humbly romantic poetry!
    Unchaste serenade is a long form for xeS

    Shadows of trees moving around,
    as time passes by.
    Nothing to stop the tangle of legs,
    no one disturbing their unchaste serenade.

    Cold water caressing their feet,
    and wet hands feeling each other.
    They sprawl over the sandy beach,
    no one disturbing their unchaste serenade.

    The sky responds to the amorous call,
    and pours tiny drops of sweet affection.
    And the falling sun shies away,
    not disturbing their unchaste serenade.

    Two hearts of gold combine,
    to form the red hue of twilight.
    with no one to disturb their unchaste serenade,
    They continue their efforts,
    out of sight...
  2. wow .. atleast feels good in words
    u described the surroundings more :(....can u put a little more focus...lol
  3. is this "Unchaste Serenade" a english word ?
  4. Fireflier

    Fireflier New Member

    I like that rhyme a lot for some reason. And yes, unchaste serenade would literally mean 'not pure music'. Not quite what it means in this context though.
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @monica n fireflier

    meaning of unchaste serenade....
    unchaste means like not pure, especially refering to virginty in this context,
    n serenade is related to music of love ......
    I've used this in conjunction to give a meaning like music of love which we consider as not good(but which really is pure)......dunno but i feel like s3x is more like music.....pure! I've neva done that so maybe i'm wrong!( ;) )

    the word s3x is used as an impure thing in human minds, while serenade here refers to purity as in s3x....
    its not a frequently used phrase.....i could've used intercourse(lol) in its place but it'd been to rough a word to form a poetry!
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    notty gal!
  7. metaldodo

    metaldodo New Member

    efforts..... yeah u do need dos i guess :p
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks metaldodo.....n double thanks for the reps/

    funny that last 3 reps I've recieved hav been only from new guyz...
    whereva those oldies gone.....huh?
  9. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    yea right....
    i liked the word unchaste serenade, cheers! keep it up

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