it goes out for some1 special....... for whom im waiting all my life...... n gonna wait....more.....till he steps into my life...... without whom.... im incomplete... life has not given me a chance to meet him... but im dreaming his dreams... every night.. every hour.. every second.... uff......... my love.... for you... on this...valentine day.. uff... nazron se nazar takraayi kuch aise.. aankhe zuka ke, palkon ne keh diya uff......... masti jo chayi chehre pe unke.. daaman bachaa ke, humne keh diya uff......... na bijali chamki, na badal garje.. kambakhth bahaane pad gaye kam.. jab dhundhe bahaane, unhon ne paas aane ke.. har bahaane ne bhi keh diya uff.........: dil me uthi jab kashm-kash hazaar kuch unkahi tamannaon ne keh diya uff......... jab behosh se hone lage, hum unke baanhon me mere har ek hosh ne bhi keh diya uff......... na dooriyan thi do dilon ke darmiyaan.. par faansale the do jismon me.. dekh ke pyaas inn tadpate jismon ki.. har faansalon ne bhi keh diya uff.........: pakadi kallai kass ke unhon ne sharmaake, mere rom-rom ne keh diya uff......... dekh ke hamaare hayaa ke jalwe.. bade nakhron se unhon ne bhi keh diya uff......... utha ke sharmon-hayaa ke chilman.. jab besharm se hum dono kuch ho gaye.. daal ke hum pe andheron ke parde.. balkha ke, raat ne bhi keh diya uff.........: haaaaaye......... har baat ne keh diya uff......... uff.........
@thanks wizzie....... allasss u replied my poem.....!! i always hoped for one or two replys from you... better late than never....
Well, i learnt it for eight years straight and forgot it in the next three years. I can understand pretty much everything, but the speaking bit is limited. Just like in telugu @nimisha: Smileys in poems crack me up.
I m not regular on this part of the forum when it comes to replying....but read it regularly @shsnawada....sawree...my bad start speaking in Hindi now
@wizard: NO. (or when you want to) @nimisha: Try writing a serious line and put a smiley next to it and read it less seriously.
kaash aap samaz paate.... love is yearning..... when some1 close adores you from heart.... all u can say... is... "uff" its the pain of pleasure.... the yearning of love... n the fear of losing this moment.....
hey nimi... well done... I guess this was the first time when i wasnt serious while reading your poem. Each uff made me laugh... No offence...Its a good poem.. but that ufff stole the show A nice fun poem !!