hi everybody.... i m new to this forum here something for u guys................................................... ........................HOW DO U STOP LOVING SOMEONE WHO IS UR LIFE...................... If today has never come . . . When I close my eyes I can still feel how beautiful yesterday was You were by my side Laughing at every joke I make Taking care of me.. Though you told we are only friends I saw love in your eye I felt love in you touch I heard love in your smile But today.. I can't believe how things have changed Though you are still by my side in every breath of mine, you have fallen out of love with me. My world has collapsed & I have no more energy. To bear your rejection Look my Love, Look into my eyes and see My love that still aches for you . . . . .. . ..... .......... SCREAM FOR LOVE.... HOPE U GUYS WILLL LIKE IT ................. WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS............
mmm... I dunno wat to say... But i completely understand what your feelings must have been behind this poem. Simple and well expressed. Welcome aboard !!
heartbreak take the poet inside you.........thanks to the person atleast ..u never have written may be...............with those feelings of togtherness...be positive...its my opinion not to be taken personally good one....hope to see more from you rohit astroguru26
poem is good... n some lines... like.. my love still aches for you.. are excellent... good work.. :secret: (y do i feel.. u r just one of my friend wit different id here? do i know u?)
oooohhh..! felt like..today was valentine...n u were saying that to me.. nice lines..... do have fun here in d forum... keep rocking IGT..
Man..! this forum is cool! I never thought I would ever open this forum... Honestly.. I dont understand them but poems are really interesting @no_pain_no_gain hey man .... same thing happned to me.... every single line of ur poem u know wat i did I started listening to Rock music ...just kidding..... anyway my first love is my guitar
good work no pain no gain. Your ID reveals a slogan on a gymnasium. but ur poem is really good keep writing more
