turning prodigal..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Feb 18, 2011.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    a yng gal born..pink cheeks n a dimpld chin
    here she'd grow up...she'd live in sin
    she's gonna turn prodigal
    she's gonna believe every stupid thng to b possibl
    damn .. ppl will cll her a bitch..she'd put me in trbl
    she'd sip at restricted bars
    she'd kiss sm dude at bful towers
    she'd cm up home
    lookin as if she toured d whole ****ing rome
    intoxic8ed nd losing her balance
    den one day i'd slap her to stop dat menace
    she'd leave..red eyes
    walk up to her bf/...he'd cmfrnt her wid wite lies
    id b at my place regrettin..ill just hope she neva cries..

    dats a rap...soooo....if u find it rude...dun b surprizd..
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Please please please write properly... it spoils all the fun.. i'm tired of saying it all the time..huh !
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    rap.. oO
    Its ok,,i guess..to rap with unstructured english...
    The message is good..overall, nice lines,..
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    @ rickyrich...aarrgh...i did not directly type dis over here...so dats y..plus dis was easy to read..i gues...nyway..im sorry..btw...won't u say nythin bout hw was it..?? :(
    @ horsemouth...hmmm...thnk u.. :)
  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    the lines are good..
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i liked it!!
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnx a lot both ov u.. :)

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