Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Nov 25, 2005.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM


    Jharne ki tarah khil-khilati hasi
    bachon se bhi bholi muskan
    tumhari khushi se khush hum
    kabhi na ho tum udas na ho koi gum

    Bus dil main hume yuhi basake rakhna
    koi baat ho jo tumhe pareshan kare
    hume zaroor kehna

    Tum ho humare liye humdard ki tarah
    humdard hi nahi ek nayi zindagi ki tarah

    Chahate hoti hai dil main beshumar
    Phir bhi tumhare liye ho pyar bhare mausam humesha
    na dhale suraj kabhi tumhari sunheri shaam se
    na ho chandni raatein kabhi bhi kum
    pyar tumhe mile Amit hardum
    humare liye Amit ho ab
    Amit rahe humari dosti hardum

    Martina --'--<@

    Good or Bad....Do Gimme Your Honest Comments :eek::
  2. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    nice one..btw whos amit???
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Amit's a close friend of mine

    is it good??..coz i gave it to him today
    he did smile and said its good...but donno if he was jus saying it coz he didnt want to hurt my feelings
    by the way its his birthday today:eek::
  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    ya it was good..wish him birthday frm mee too....
  5. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    hmm amit .. well .. i don't think he's a friend anymore .. something's surely there.. anyway .. u know y amit smiled at da end ?? .. it's coz finally it ended .. n he felt relieved !!! hehehe :p:
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i would wish him.. if he knew you..:)

    LOL...Maybe :)...
  7. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Cool lines dear...

  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks dear

    a tiny shayari..
    "Dosti dil se hoti hai
    hum dil ke tukde har ek dost ko de chuke
    aapke paas jo tukda hai use sambhal ke rakhna
    uske bina humara dil adhura hai"
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice poem bubbly....
  10. shak

    shak Harrr!

    pheeesh bubbly!! your urdu/hindi is even difficult than garima's! .. sorry didnt get most of it .. sorry .. (wouldnt have replied but the line at the end made me ... and that blushing emoticon..)
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    that's really nice, i wish i could write in hindi/urdu... :(
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks Garima...

    @ Sharukh
    is it difficult in a good way or bad way??
    is the language and grammar fine or i should try and improve on that

    i'll write the meaning so u get a rough idea of whats written
    thanks dude
    when i said Good or Bad i meant that
    glad u posted ur comments..

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