Tum Nahi Aaye.....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Dec 2, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Yet another poem with some sad emotions....


    Kahan the tum jab mujhe tumhari zaroorat thi
    Kahan the tum jab mai tanha thi
    Yaad aati thi tumhari
    Cheekh cheekh ke pukarta tha dil tumhe
    Par is dil ko dilasa dene....tum nahi aaye

    Kahan the tum jab log mujh par hanste the
    Kahan the tum jab log mujhe pagal kehte the
    Aankh bhar aati thi meri
    Kahan kahan na doondti thi ye aakhen tumhe
    Par mere ye aansoo ponchne tum nahi aaye

    Itne barson baad aj aaya hai wo din
    Jab khud ko tanha mehsoos kar rahe ho tum...mere bin
    Chahte ho ki ab mai thaam loon tumhara haath
    Par ye haath ab koi or thaam chuka hai..intezar to bohot kia maine tumhara
    Par mera ye haath thamne tum nahi aaye


    wat say guys.....good/bad/ugly???
     
  2. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    i wanna cry now after readin this,..... :eek::

    well written..
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    hey i wsn't expecting that quick reply.....thanx Ansh for liking it....
    & yeah.....dont cry dude...i have played that part already.....this is just to share with u guys...so that i can c some nice, some not so nice , some cute , some not so cute, some interesting, some not so interesting replies...& yeah some reps (ofcourse) & smile :grin:
    Thanx again.......
     
  4. abhi_lovespooja

    abhi_lovespooja New Member

    hiiii garima
    again a sad but very emotionally written poem...
    since u ve alreay played this part....
     
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Like ur siggy truly says
    "Love is an ocean of emotions,
    Which we keep expressing,
    But, is yet to be expressed"

    its a Lovely poem babe...
     
  6. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Well .. ur eyes have already cried garima ???? muh heart cried ..
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @abhi, bubbly, Mohsin.....thanx guys. U ppl make my efforts worth it :) thanx again
     
  8. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Very Touchy...


    Yaar kaun hai woh jisne tumhe itna rulaya.. agar woh ek baar mil jaye na.. to main use jaroor puchunga...

    Tum Kyun Nahi Ayee.. *just kidding trying to make u smile*
     
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^thanx cos it did make me smile :)
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    & btw guyz....just thot to share with u...that its Nishant's Birthday today .....the one for whom i write......
    Hope he gets evrythng before he evn wish for that :)
     
  11. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    ^^hope he gets u..:)
     
  12. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    :(

    really nice, garry... :'(
     
  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) yeah....he wud b one lucky chap on earth....ooops i think he is ;) wot say???
     
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    the poem or my situation....;) :p: just kidding....
    thanx for reading....&mk sure that u delete that cryly from ur list :)
     
  15. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    hum to aaye the...

    answer to..tum na aaye

    meri pukar ka hamesha intezaar kiya tumne
    meri aansuon me tumhare dard ki tadap na dekhi
    jis bheed me kho gaye the tum apne gum leke
    waha tumhe dhundhti huyi meri nazaron ki zalak na dekhi

    bedard jamaane ne pagal keh ke jab pukara tumhe
    meri aankhon me aayi chingaariyon ki dehek na dekhi
    majbboriyon ko gale laga ke,ro rahe the hum bhi
    par tumne to dard se bhigi ye palak bhi na dekhi

    tumne kya intezaar kiya mera? tum to ho chale kisi aur ke
    bass phool ke kaante dekhe tumne,hamari mehek na dekhi
    mahburiyon ko thukraaye hum aaye barson ke baad tum tak
    paya jo tumhe auron ke paas... meri aankho me bujhte diyon ki lehek na dekhi
     
  16. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    ^^^ one more in the poetic gang !!! good one !!!

    welcome Namisha...
     
  17. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    one poem from me too


    Sab kahenge "aap kaise hain"

    Jab tak aap ke paas paise hain

    :beer:
     
  18. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    hey... thanks vishwaa
     
  19. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Did u rite this ther n then :shock:??? thats awesome.....
    but i wish that he wud evr say this to me....yeah, b4 some1 else occupies my khali dil ;)
    welcome to the group....:grin:
     
  20. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :RollLol: kahan se maari ??
     

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