tum jis kal se darte ho..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 14, 2012.

  1. dhoondha khoob saloon tak
    vo matla tha likha hum-nai
    ek be-kushboo kaagazz ke
    be-parvaah purze par..
    have thi ya ki aandhi si
    udaati jati thi sab kuch
    utar ka bheed se aage
    uthaya ek diya tum ne..
    koi maula koi haafizz shararat soochata nikala
    Mila ke hum parindoon ko madina ki taraf bhaga
    fakat vo vaqut makhmal ki rajjayi sa humesha hai
    main jab bhi oodh ke sooya main agli umar jaga
    ye sach manoo ki tana raat main jab gungunaaooge
    tumhain mehsoos hoga tum meri gazloon se bante ho..
    mujhe lauta do mera kaagazz, jalti saansoon ka diya
    Main aazaan hunn uss kal tum jis tum jis kal se darte ho..


    Meanings
    Matla: second stanza of a gazal; aazaan - fist voice of prayer
     
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2012
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  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    your poems always leave me with a dazed expression..especially the gazal types..
    loved it..really good..

    i want to learn urdu :( !! it sounds so royal yet so soft..!
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    i really was left confused after the 9th line...my understanding of the language isn't very good...and its not been spelled very well too..But the first 8 lines, i loved very much. And reps for the good use of words...
     
  4. thanks people :)

    i like this piece too..
     

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