very simple rhythm.....C major and F major https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZsEUOzX1MKc C F tum itanaa jo, muskuraa rahe ho F C kyaa gam hai, jis ko chhupaa rahe ho F C ban jaayenge jahar peete peete C F ye ashk jo peete jaa rahe ho and yes its in a lower scale, mainly because i cant sing this song in the higher scale haha https://www.esnips.com/doc/07a27177-5e58-4b6a-bb40-8426bf6f15de/tum-itna-joo heres my attempt at the higher scale with a karaoke track, its easy in the starting but then when i get to the kya gam part, i just cant hit the notes
u have a grt voice work on ur rythm and scale u might have got the chords wrong the whole song is not on c and f i am not a gazal player but i think it is on d and g at the start
the chords sound fine, You are just singing one octave below? transpose the chords to E so you could sing it in the high pitch of your voice.. try this one one scale below on D which is the actual scale. E A tum itanaa jo, muskuraa rahe ho A E kyaa gam hai, jis ko chhupaa rahe ho A E ban jaayenge jahar peete peete E A ye ashk jo peete jaa rahe ho D G tum itanaa jo, muskuraa rahe ho G D kyaa gam hai, jis ko chhupaa rahe ho G D ban jaayenge jahar peete peete D G ye ashk jo peete jaa rahe ho
yea i sang it in a lower octave....the thing is when i sing it in a higher scale my voice cracks at the kya gam hai jisko part......... heres me singing it with a karaoke track....just the first three lines, its in the orignal scale https://www.esnips.com/doc/07a27177-5e58-4b6a-bb40-8426bf6f15de/tum-itna-joo
link is dead..... Thats a very easy song yaar, If the voice is cracking at kya gham hai then may be you need a different song. Try Tuning the guitar one note below the standard tunning, either bring the voice up or take the chord scale down..try tuning the guitar in whole step down tuning and then sing it on C.
link isnt dead ......it might be easy for you, but i have a much deeper voice than any one else i know and its very hard for me to sing songs in high scales.........the D and G scale is pretty good
but you are still singing too low for that C...You need to tune down the guitar if you want to find the C your voice is singing on.. if the voice is choking this means you are on a scale higher than your voice can handle, go an octave below. Still it was a nice try, the link you gave me is opening the esnip home page...