Tum hamein kya bhulaoge.....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Jan 4, 2006.

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  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Yu chhod ke tanha hamein kahan jaoge
    Chah kar bhi tum..hamein na bhula paoge

    Ek yaad bankar rahenge zehen me tumhare hum
    Chah kar bhi na kar paoge hamari yaad ko kum

    Jaa kar dekh lo kitni duur ja paoge
    Yakeen hai hamein ki hamari tarah koi na dhoond paoge

    Jab nahi paoge apne kareeb hamein kal
    Tab yaad ayenge..saath bithaye wo pal

    Mar kar bhi tumse duur na ja payenge
    Dil se apne dil me dhoondna....

    Vahin kisi kone me ham mil jayenge
     
    Garima, Jan 4, 2006
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  2. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Nice poem. Emotion again (thats a good thing). Isnt it a bit tiring to write hindi in english?
     
    shsnawada, Jan 4, 2006
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  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^lol....no other option we have...if we want the expressions to b read by others...thanx for reading Suhas :):)
     
    Garima, Jan 4, 2006
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  4. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Very nice...Garima ! I like every line of this poem.

    Thanks

    Amanush...

    :)
     
    Amanush..., Jan 4, 2006
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  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thank u so much buddy....each line :shock: it means alot....thanx again :grin:
     
    Garima, Jan 4, 2006
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  6. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    rocking ........,.Garima.................

    btw.... feel sumthing's wrong wid the 4th line (sumthing missing or watever...,correct me if I m wrong...my Hindi is not that good at all ;-)
     
    apurbajd, Jan 4, 2006
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  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    yes.. really nice...
    and fourth line is missing 'na' in it.. isnt it?
     
    nimisha, Jan 5, 2006
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  8. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    speechless
     
    vishwa_81us, Jan 5, 2006
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  9. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Great Goin Garima .. :) I donno if ur confusion in love will end or not .. but it'l definitely make u a good poet :p:
     
    notty_lad, Jan 5, 2006
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  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @apurba...ur hindi is not that bad...as u were rite...something was missing...
    @nimisha...u r rite too....in guessing :)
    @Vishwa....me speechless too
    @Mohsin...Geminies r born confused...lol...so i guess i'll b confused always

    @everyone.....thanx :grin: :grin:
     
    Garima, Jan 5, 2006
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  11. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    wowwww!!! GREAT WORK... cha gaye ho!!!!! i swear! u r REAL WELL! :beer:
     
    #iR@, Jan 5, 2006
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  12. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^ u rite real well! ziyada hyper ho ker forgot to type "write" :eek::
     
    #iR@, Jan 5, 2006
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  13. XOHAIB

    XOHAIB New Member

    Hi Man This Is Xohaib Good Work It Really Nice
     
    XOHAIB, Jan 5, 2006
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  14. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    ahhh.. !!!! bollywood queen back.. again.. !!!
     
    knight_guitar, Jan 5, 2006
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  15. can_i_play

    can_i_play New Member

    back with a touchy words....
    achha likha hain....
     
    can_i_play, Jan 5, 2006
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  16. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ah..these sentiments and we human beings r inseperable!

    nice poem..btw
     
    vini, Jan 5, 2006
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  17. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Hira....:grin: so gud to c u here buddy...thanks

    errr...Woman actually :)....& thank u too :):)

    Thank u so much Sharad....for calling me Queen
     
    Garima, Jan 5, 2006
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  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thanks...Vikram 'n' Vini....aha, movie title like Neil 'n' Nikki.....LOL
     
    Garima, Jan 5, 2006
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  19. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    awesome work as always! :)
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Jan 5, 2006
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  20. shak

    shak Harrr!

    you can never write a bad poem ... this one is a testament to this fact :)
    lovely poem garry ... very well balanced
     
    shak, Jan 5, 2006
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