tujhyachsaathi... (marathi)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Apr 20, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    finally i found solution to post my marathi poems here..
    hope..all of u wud like this poem of mine..


    तुझ्याचसाठी..

    तुझ्यासाठीच जगायचय.. तुझ्यासाठीच मरायचय..
    तुला जिंकण्यासाठी आता तुझ्याशीच हरायचय..

    तुझ्या निळ्या डोळ्यांतल्या सागरात बुडायचय..
    पोहता येत नसलं तरी, डोळे मिटुन पडायचय..

    तोडुन सर्व बंध हे.. तुला मिठीत धरायचय..
    श्वासांमध्ये गुंतेल श्वास.. असं काही करायचय..

    ध्यानी, मनी, स्वप्नी, चित्ती.. फ़क्त तुला स्मरायचय..
    या जगात नको पण.. तुझ्या मनात उरायचय..


    comments please:cool:
     
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful Lines...

    Excellent poem, portraying powerful emotions...
    Keep it up!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Second stanza is good .... nice handwriting too ..
     
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    forgot to write translation.. here it is..
    --
    wanna live for you.. wanna die for you..
    im gonna lose my heart to u..just to win yours..

    wanna see in ur deep blue eyes..
    wanna get drown in those ocean eyes..though i dont know how to swim..

    breaking all rules.. i wanna take u in my arms..
    n wanna feel ur every breath..

    wanaa see u only..whenever i open my eyes..
    no matter, i stay in this world or not.. but i wanna stay in ur heart forever..
    --

    all continuity of this poem is lost in this translation.. incoherrent..and..
    i know its too mushy-mushy.. but..
    thats how my languege is.. too sweet when its about love..
    --

    @zoom ,sachoo.. thanks for reading..
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    jaisi bhi hai acchi hai...haha abee tum ladkiyaan kuch aur bhi soochti ho ya nahi duud jaaungi...marr jauungi ...r guys only their for taking ur live's making u drown ...aisa kyoon nahi soochti ki ....chall leave it...HAHAHA
     
  6. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

     
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @madhuresh... thats just a way of exaggeration in love... lol...

    @sachoo.. thanks for such saccha saccha reply...
     

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