Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sharmontime, Mar 13, 2006.

  1. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    The clock of life is wound but once
    And none has the power to stop it.
    Now is the only time you own,
    Live, love, toil with a will
    Have no faith in tomorrow,
    As you cant even frown,
    For the clock may then be still.

    Comments and Suggestions welcome and open for further add-ons...:)
    "world expressed in one stanza."

    Sharmontime :cool: [TM]
  2. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    but whats the[TM] for???????
  3. sayanakaharry

    sayanakaharry Forum Leader

    nice work. me too dont understand the TM though. ;)
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice thought....
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Short and it ur own composition?
  6. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    @ ujsen : Hmm...So noticed huh?. That is my way of conveying regards and thanks for all your support. I would be ever indebted to the people (including IGT) around me who have created a cause for me to continue living. And this way of expressing my gratitude has indeed kept me alive.
    Though this might be little ridiculous, this is something i dont want to change.I dont fancy explaining more about this.
    And ofcourse, it also means that, none else (morally) can put the :cool: smilie after their name. :p:

    @sayanakaharry :
    glad that you like the poem. And regarding [TM], the above reasons must suffice, which though might not sound logical. Never Mind. ;)

    @ nimisha : ...thanks a lot. :)

    @ walk_alone : Happy that you like it...and yes, it is my own.Else i would have mentioned if its not and probably might have specified the source.:)
  7. rockstar_dude

    rockstar_dude New Member

    Dude....Kewl poem man... Way to go!! Keep it up....
  8. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    thanks rock star!!!
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good poem how did i miss it
    sahi hai "keep walking"
  10. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    keep walking ????

    @shar... too short but good.
  11. #iR@


    very nice man! good job! :)
  12. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    thanks a lot...:)

    love you all.

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