arbit poem guys,first attempt...... che nascent from a blue womb, promised was he a blue tomb, nay he said to all their pearls, revolutionize i will this world! schooled though in medicine he was, to give up his life for a lost cause, he scouted the land on his norton 500, to restore faith to the hearts that were sundered. battling the elements,he forged ahead, some more shrapnel,another comrade dead! all this while to forget the searing pain, he refreshed his memory to feel that rage again. an eye for an eye and a limb for a limb, his guerilla technique finally wore thin, only to spawn a new breed of warriors, who put to rest the capitalist's desires.
i really dont know much abt the guy who u have written the poem abt : so maybe that's why i couldnt appreciate it much... : but it's really nice to read such a different poem and as for the the way it has been written, GRRRREEAAT job!! i hope ur writing more poems, do post em here :rockon:
i loved it..wow, i wish i had a Rage type of band, i wud have definately "used"(read plagiarised) those lyrics che was one awesome person.
hey thanks dude,u can def use it if u wanna altho i dont really think itd fit into a song. i thought it makes more sense coming up with the song first n then the lyrics im trying to fit them in2 one of our compsitions too but havent been successful as yet
thanks tejas, about the flow i guess ur right i got a lil too impatient to finish it off towards the end will be a lil more patient the next time... and hey....great job on the tool review, PARABOLA is a brillllllliiiiiiiaaaaaaaannnnnnt song am starting to like tool now....must say the drummer n bassist merit a million kudos
ohh hell, the lytricswill fit in perfectly( edxcept the last line though) ..i need someone who can sing this in an angry rebellios manner, thatta be perfect...
