When i realized that just the twittering of birds makes me feel satisfied with life, I harboured no thought, no idea, in me which would pass a quavering pain in me. As I stood there, looking upon my destiny, the unending grief which the world beheld for me, my ultimate goal was creeping in me which had always been the source of my fears and loneliness. Then nature opened its mighty heart towards me, to travel and go deep in to it. But my eyes were too sour, full of hatred an unquenching thirst. Its mysteries lay open infront of me just to get folded. I laughed at my own folly as, I understood that nature itself was so ruthless and our very existence among them is so fragile,temporary and precious. Which is why none must take them for granted, maybe thats where the end lies..... ........maybe thats what they say it is "It is all the law of nature................"
I think this is really good. It's different from poetry as in it doesn't have rhyme but still, the words are poetic and really flow well.
Really liked this one. Good work. And about the rhyme, i somehow like it better without it, 'cause sometimes, when following a rhyme scheme, people tend to concentrate more on it than the subject. I like it better this way. Keep it up.