Toot Chuki Hoon Mein

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by sweetie, Feb 13, 2006.

  1. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Na Karti Mein Pyar To Acha Tha,
    Na Chahti Tujhe To Acha Tha,
    Na Teri Ummeed Hoti To Acha Tha,
    Na Bewafa Tum Hote To Acha Tha...!

    Pyar Na Kariyo Kaha Tha Sweetie,
    Bahut Seh Chuki Mein Ab Bas,
    Khatam Kar Doongi Sab Naaton Ko,
    Bhool Jaaoongi Pyar Ki Baaton Ko...!

    Jeena Mushkil. Hai Marna Bhi Mushkil,
    Bewafa Hai Tu Maanna Chahta Nahi Dil,
    Bas Ab Mein Or Nahi Seh Sakti,
    Bin Tere Bhi, Nahi Reh Sakti,

    Aaj Khud Hi Yeh Jeevan Khatam Karoongi,
    Kam Se Kam Kishton Mein To Na Maroongi...!


    Comments plzzzzz;)
     
  2. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    No comments..!!!!Matlab kisiko pasand nahi aayi yeh post:(
     
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  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    its very good sweetie...

    zindagi rukti nahi ek ke chale jaane se
    mud ke dekhti nahi kise ke bichad saane se

    is ko chal na hai isse tamanna mein
    koi to dega saath is khof raahon mein
     
  4. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    It's my personal opinion.. !!

    But this poem was not good at all.. !!
     
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I agree with Knight....didnt quite like it that much.

    Nice try.
     

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