too tired to sleep

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Feb 13, 2009.

  1. Sonnets burn over my eyelids, too - much nicotine I sipped
    scorching rays of silence so dark, just too tired to sleep..

    who turned on the flash button, who wants to get clicked
    the kid went out with a cross and a harp, feeling too tired to sleep..

    the boozed street-lights wobble and cuddle, they have their own way
    I squeeze some strings touch some others, drink some; sound looks deep

    This all so still, still’s paint grey walls of cubicles, here no shadows can creep
    The cant-dream thingy is a proper-noun, called too tired to sleep
     
  2. distorted

    distorted satan

    Awesome!!!
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    gr8, makeable-into-a-song poetry!
     
  4. thanks ppl... i think this must be the most frequent reason for people to indulge in a act like poems....temperory insomania..waht say ?
     
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    yea, u kinda feel u're gonna swim n sink into th' poetry u just created, it feels like its ur own kid.....n u wanna nurture it n feel like god....
     
  6. ^ nahi its the kids kid ....u knw in greek phimosophy they treated the genius (creative self of a person) as a demon, who will come and give the thoughts....thus the artist was never under pressure, he / she if fails to do good its beacause the genius or the demon didnt come to him to help....same way i have kid, whose the demon !!
    so its the kid of the kid

    waht say ?
     
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    yea, or more like th' literature created is: kid of the person n his/her creative demon?
    :p

    ?
     
  8. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    A quote I heard that I've always loved-


    Genius is a state of mind, just like insanity.
     
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^thats y its the Devil:p
     
  10. ^ The innocent crazy ziddy devil...he just waants to sleep !
     
  11. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^wake him up !
     
  12. ^he's lost his interust in thingys....
    no more the sounds the smeells the looks keep him amused, i think his time is over :( !!
    any remidies ?
     
  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    yes.


    xeS.
     
  14. detritus

    detritus New Member

    well, since everyone's posting.
     
  15. augur

    augur I love bjr

    ^What he said.
     
  16. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    stupor or coma?
    smell him my socks, he'll feel ALIVE
    ;)
     
  17. ^ i cant tlk much tihS
     
  18. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    mee too
    hush.....
     
  19. damm i dint wanted to cmment here ....*giggles...dimples*
     

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