hi ppl... another poem... well i must say that this one is just DARK! i don;t even think it makes sense! : its just stupid... but still want to torture u guys and make u read it! MAUAHAHHAA!: well the reason for riting this poem was cause i was bored! : here goes... TOO LATE! Alone in the darkness, I sat Hoping wat I had seen was not true Wiping the tears that were now flowing fast I thought of my past… My intestines twisted in pain, As I thought of my life; Money was my aim Theft was a rule Murder was a game Love was a trade Cheat was my moral It all seemed rite… But seeing this today… It all seems a sin An unforgivable sin I open my eyes Hoping for this nightmare to be over Since I had learnt my lesson But theres no waking up… …from this nightmare… I see the blood gushing out of their bodies Alone in the darkness, I sit Hoping wat I was seeing was not true Wiping the tears that were now flowing fast I moved towards my family That ONCE lived… HONEST comments r welcomed!
nice thot...i liked the starting... spl these lines... Alone in the darkness, I sat Hoping wat I had seen was not true Wiping the tears that were now flowing fast I thought of my past… My intestines twisted in pain, As I thought of my life; Money was my aim Theft was a rule Murder was a game Love was a trade Cheat was my moral It all seemed rite…
hmmmmmm... lets c.... NUMBER 1) i REPLIED to ur PM and was HOPING for a reply... number 2) yea u can... *smiling*
i remember tht he asked me once...tht must b 'tanhayee'...but i forgot to ask for the link that time.... Thanks
