Hey folks, Gimme ure opinion on the poem "Tonight" Tonight I think of the lonely tomorrow My life , unwillingly smiling away Glory and glare, no meaning to me A mysterious shadow, walking away Dawn of the day rises, Shedding tears as the night drowns Burning rage within my soul Calm as a dead ocean They say solitude lies within Like a candle burning in the wind A grave smelling of musk Blood in my veins running dry As I await my fate The devil inside me Whispers within my bosom Tonight I think of the lonely tomorrow by "khayal"
Well, you've used good words but I can't help feeling they are mismatched. I'm guessing u put a little of yourself in the poem, which is why I guess I don't understand it. Don't think I'm harsh, I'm Just a good critic.
