to hide / to be told

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Sep 27, 2009.

  1. faith his friend, so very bold
    desire envys him, and hates his hold
    emotions too shy need a small story,
    sometiems to hide, sometimes to be told..

    old school friend, the rusted leaves in ground
    use to play here, there they use to go down
    this L shaped bock where she lived
    the riverside, the green lawns, soft dream dipped

    he came back home he went to the library
    to chek out a painting a sketch framed in ivory
    bad at memory, those lanes were roudy
    in the cacaphoney of adolosence a piece little cloudy..

    that light patch on wall, tells someting was thier
    his heart skips a beat, but man its not thier..
    strong man he keeps, a brisk pace of steps
    at-once feeling credited, at-onse feels the depts..

    there were many things he did some good some bad
    ahh! :( no one remembers, & its a shame to be sad

    corridores of time, soo daam cold
    get goosebumps and dimples whenever unfold

    again

    faith his friend, so very bold
    desire envys him, and hates his hold
    emotions too shy need a small story,
    sometiems to hide, sometimes to be told..
     
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwww
     
  3. thanks... evevn i thnk this ws gud work since i could manage to keep it open to just a situation ...thnx again 4 ur reply
     
  4. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    cacophony**
    adolescence**

    This poem is WONDERFUL. Seriously. Awesome job!! :D
     
  5. thanku..read the new one !
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    awesome......its like...immersing.....
     

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