To an Angel....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Hardik, Mar 3, 2006.

  1. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    To an Angel

    I saw a smile
    Brighter than realization
    Which made me realize
    That to reach the ears is
    The destiny of the corners of my mouth

    I saw those eyes
    Deeper than feelings
    Which made me feel
    That its possible to see
    Beyond this illusion called life

    I heard a voice
    More pleasant than sound of raindrops
    Which said to me
    That words are not to be spoken
    They are meant ot be meant

    I heard a laughter
    More pure than music
    Which taught me
    That songs are not meant to be heard
    But ot be felt,to be inhaled

    Yes,I saw someone
    More divine than beauty
    More soulful than moonlight
    More lustrous than pearls
    More radiant than sunlight
    And then i was sure
    That if there's an angel on earth,
    Its her,

    Its you......

    comments welcome...:beer:
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  2. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    Wow..beautifully written !Good work buddy seems like youv bumped in2 ur angel...!All the best!
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Made me smile, like a tard in the dining hall, :grin: Nice work bro:)
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Well written dude!
    Cancerians like you make right use of their emotions!;)

    favorite lines-"That words are not to be spoken
    They are meant to be meant"
  5. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    @broken_heart.....not really bumped into my angel yet...may be when i do,the words i write then will be more beautiful...thanks 4 reading:) of my happy-happy poems..its meant to make ppl smile:)...gald u liked it..thank a lot..

    @martina....proud to ba a cancerian..:rock:...thanks..:)
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    very well said man....actually these comparisions ..metaphor's...or wahtever u may call it.. r really really good....
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!




  8. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^lol...nope..that wasnt 4 you...:p:

    @madhuresh...thank you..:)

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