ok....This poem written by us talks about the journey of a couple....how they fall in love, how they face hardships and pass the test of time !! Time stood still when we first met we were strong but our hearts melted the moment we saw, in love we fell we bought those dreams which no one could sell moments passed, closer we came life changed and never remained the same Time woke up, gave us a jolt It seperated us and the doors were bolt Our hands were weak when we banged the door only pain was left and with days it grew evenmore We looked upon the time to give an answer But time was a question which needed an answer Days went by and so did months we closed all our fighting fronts suddenly the time woke us up and made us realise that we were not, but he was wise he revealed that he was not time but the test and we have done what could have been the best Time asked the test to pardon us and leave we have been through a lot and passed the seive Time smiled and held our hands gave us a hug and joined our hands When we curse our times in grief and despair Its only time in disguise as a miracle that appears We love our time now even more thank our test to have brought us on shore
"our hearts got melt"? C'mon, you can do better than that. Apart from that it's a good poem. Full of abstract imagery. Well done, i wonder what this poem can be classified as, hmmm, i have to think.
Despite our holding back of emotions....." our hearts got melt" has been used for a special connotation.. which only me or he can understand. Anyways .,... thanks !!
Well, i didnt know that. I thought it was just wrong english and i was doing my job! *sulks in a corner* (yeah, i love corners)
u need not sulk in a corner, that IS wrong english @varshita it should be "hearts got melted" or if u wanna end the line with "melt" then i'd suggest "we were strong but our hearts did melt" nice poem though
^^^^ lolz..... disturbed, u rock man! HEY PUBLIC!!! Whats with "hearts melted"???? U can add together afterwards if u must, but do u really love the word GOT??? Avoid it, its a baad kid!!!
offfoooooooooooooo!! @disturbed and cryptic ......happy now?? @ nimisha ... thank you... by the way... you didnt have any probs with " hearts got melt"?? @notty.... i know u didnt post here... but see i m following your instructions for not spamming !!
*gets up from corner, looks at angel, walks over, gives her a BIG hug, and we come back and live (not necessarily together) happily ever after, the end*
