thoughts

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by browneyegurlie, Feb 14, 2005.

  1. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    Crystal eyes
    opening wide,
    letting the salt dry.
    The wounds are now healing,
    but only to be reopened?
    There's something about you,
    which makes me feel happy.
    But why am I saying this?
    As it doesnt matter
    You'll never know or care.
    Like the crumbling rose,
    swept away by one breeze.
    The eyes close,
    only to bleed again.
     
    browneyegurlie, Feb 14, 2005
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  2. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    nice work.. really heart touching... keep up the pace of writing...
     
    rizaaj, Feb 14, 2005
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  3. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    thank you..........
     
    browneyegurlie, Feb 14, 2005
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  4. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    :'(
    nice work
     
    rizaaj, Feb 14, 2005
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  5. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    hehe hmmm yeh thats wat it looks like mite happen meh
     
    browneyegurlie, Feb 14, 2005
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  6. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    nice poem....keep it up.
     
    Rey1970, Feb 14, 2005
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  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice poem dahlin:):) You're just getting better and better, hope to see more from you;)
     
    d_ist_urb_ed, Feb 14, 2005
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  8. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    lol thank u....i'm sure u will!
     
    browneyegurlie, Feb 14, 2005
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  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    nice poem, browney. Keep posting more.
     
    Sanjay Mazumder, Feb 14, 2005
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  10. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    hmmm lots of emotions browny :)

    nyways nice thoughts... :) ..

    likd ur poem.. :)
     
    Subhro, Feb 14, 2005
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