Thorns

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Aug 22, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Wow...it's been a while since I've been on indian guitar tabs...I just wrote a new poem which is a bit...odd...other than my usual style..it's called Thorns...

    -Thorns-

    Attractive roses may be tempting to pluck
    Water might make you want to swim
    This wise advice I give to you
    A rose can always have some thorns
    Even water has dangers of it’s own

    To the one I love,I speak these words
    Be aware of the world around you
    For sometimes,it can be a cruel one
    It’s not wrong to pluck a rose
    But if you do,do it with care...
     
    rocking_devil and $cReWdR!veR like this.
  2. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    nice one....
     
  3. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    i liek it ...

    and congrats man ... now u have become a centurion ...
     
  4. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice stuff there....i esp liked da 2nd verse....
     
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Very nicely written...Nirvana!Hope to read more from you soon

    :)

    Amanush...
     
  6. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    thanks,I appreciate your feedback ;)
     
  7. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    superb lyrics man.........dunno how i missed this one?!but superb lyrics again!reps 4 u!
     

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