Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Aug 22, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak's been a while since I've been on indian guitar tabs...I just wrote a new poem which is a bit...odd...other than my usual's called Thorns...


    Attractive roses may be tempting to pluck
    Water might make you want to swim
    This wise advice I give to you
    A rose can always have some thorns
    Even water has dangers of it’s own

    To the one I love,I speak these words
    Be aware of the world around you
    For sometimes,it can be a cruel one
    It’s not wrong to pluck a rose
    But if you do,do it with care...
    rocking_devil and $cReWdR!veR like this.
  2. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    nice one....
  3. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    i liek it ...

    and congrats man ... now u have become a centurion ...
  4. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice stuff there....i esp liked da 2nd verse....
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Very nicely written...Nirvana!Hope to read more from you soon


  6. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    thanks,I appreciate your feedback ;)
  7. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    superb lyrics man.........dunno how i missed this one?!but superb lyrics again!reps 4 u!

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