Broken windows of my life barricade destiny's stride the lights blow out in my head as i go through the motions of this life Broken windows me surround shattered dreams all around hope's snuffed out, the light flickers out i see the end sad , cold eyes mirror them Broken windows ,sharp as knives pain and sorrow fill my life my heart bleeds for cold comfort crimson pools reflect my life i see blind destiny marching on with the blind man's stride she stumbles and falls ,never to rise broken windows.... ********************************************************** Bouquets n brickbats r welcome.
not a very cogently written piece ...some repatation and confusion in thoughts ..... the contrast even is missing.....cant say good but culd have been better..!
good effort ... but i think this was a sentence that ended the whole effect end in the second para... ...Broken windows me surround... otherwise... nice!
