Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by zoomingrocket, Dec 30, 2004.

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    A point I wanna tell,
    A point I wanna raise...
    A point I wanna discuss,
    A point I wanna make you understand...

    Someone not ready to listen...
    Someone not ready to accept...
    Someone ready to leave everything...
    Someone a little over-confident...

    The point is,
    Capacity to do something , &
    Capacity to be in a state, to do something...

    All I wanna wish you is..
    A happy & prosperous life...

    So Think...

  2. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    hmmm....are you dedicating this to some1...lolz....anyways, very nice poem...i could use it in a greeting card or something if it's not copyrighted.....;)
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice poem Zoom:)
  4. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    @desipride: Yup... its dedicated to my pal Sank! He wasnt ready to listen anything since long time... So i decided to tell him this way! I hope he wud be back to normal!
    Anyways, you can use it in Cards... I dont mind! Just see that you dont hurt the recipient's feelings!

  5. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    nice and lovely way to make someone understand , good work zoom !!
  6. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    only a senseless person wont understand after reading this... nice poem zoom..
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    The poem is simple but it has something. It touched me. Keep it up, Zoom.
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