They said that they Love each other...

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  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    They said that they Love each other

    They said that they Love each other
    Yet everyday they shouted…
    …at each other

    They said that they Care for each other
    Yet everyday they fought….
    …with each other

    Is this Love which teach us
    To fight…to shout…
    Or is this these fights and shouts
    Which make us feel
    That we know Love’s whereabouts

    Fighting and then crying*
    Shouting and then shying*

    The vicious circle goes on
    Thinking that it’s all Love
    We keep living on…

    Its time to think
    Its time to talk
    What’s the point of being together
    When with each other’s presence
    They can’t even walk

    Is this for the world they are sacrificing
    And acting to be together
    Or is it the thought of being ALONE
    Because of which they are getting bothered

    *Crying-because of the guilt for fighting because they misunderstood each other
    Shying-not able to see through each other’s eyes because of guilt

    :cool:
     
    Garima, Sep 14, 2006
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  2. Devilshly_Pur$

    Devilshly_Pur$ Banned

    ^a really good one garima... :grin:
     
    Devilshly_Pur$, Sep 14, 2006
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  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^Thank You Vipin....
     
    Garima, Sep 14, 2006
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  4. Devilshly_Pur$

    Devilshly_Pur$ Banned

    ^ Its just u felt or got inspired from somebody? cuz it’s really a good one…
     
    Devilshly_Pur$, Sep 14, 2006
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  5. SG1

    SG1 &quot;Brown Jesus&quot;

    nice one .. but i dun think thats love . lol
    they wasted time with each other period.
     
    SG1, Sep 14, 2006
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  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    dont want to comment on that...
    Thanks for liking it...
    Loves mkaes u helpless sometimes....& thats the situation here...
    Thanks...
     
    Garima, Sep 14, 2006
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  7. SG1

    SG1 &quot;Brown Jesus&quot;

    well maybe it never happend to me .. am in luv since 5 years now and still growing like a virus :)
     
    SG1, Sep 14, 2006
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  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    i hope it grows at a double rate from now on :)
     
    Garima, Sep 14, 2006
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  9. SG1

    SG1 &quot;Brown Jesus&quot;

    yayyyyyy bleh
    damn these smokes will kill me.
     
    SG1, Sep 14, 2006
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  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^^ummm....spamming?? :NoNo:












    :p:
     
    Garima, Sep 14, 2006
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  11. abhi_lovespooja

    abhi_lovespooja New Member

    hey garima
    nice poem......
    very well written.....
    abhi..
     
    abhi_lovespooja, Sep 16, 2006
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  12. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    *speechless*




    keep rockin' gurl! :)
     
    #iR@, Sep 16, 2006
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  13. g0g0l

    g0g0l ! SpAm

    Good one! Keep it up!!
     
    g0g0l, Sep 17, 2006
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  14. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    remarkable!!!!
     
    amit82cse, Sep 17, 2006
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  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Abhi, Hira, Sugata, Amit....Thank you guys.....and a gal :p:
     
    Garima, Sep 18, 2006
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  16. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    achhi hai..achhi hai :)
    good goin
     
    vini, Sep 18, 2006
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  17. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^Thank You Vini....
     
    Garima, Sep 18, 2006
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  18. CoppeR_ChiC

    CoppeR_ChiC Banned

    ahh, poetry forum in here that is nice. this site has some variety. I'm not into poems much but nicely written. :beer:

    the smiley collection is also good :rule:
     
    CoppeR_ChiC, Sep 21, 2006
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  19. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^Thank You
     
    Garima, Sep 22, 2006
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  20. lukemanasseh

    lukemanasseh New Member

    hiii...u've written good.....good sense...post more..
     
    lukemanasseh, Sep 22, 2006
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