There I shall remain

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Jul 10, 2012.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    So I logged in after a long time to post something I wrote to reconcile with my girlfriend...
    It did work, if so you ask.

    Sometimes the past may creep on us,
    Rear its ugly head and scare,
    But there I'll be, my arms around you,
    Lest it come forth and dare.

    Sometimes I might be difficult for you,
    For you to rejoin your strings with mine,
    And shine the truth in my eyes,
    Our hearts are one in time.
    And the tempest may blow like the november,
    But our love blooms like june
    Which croons the night full of life
    With a light and lively tune.

    And while the distance may seem unconquerable,
    As you see me failing more and more,
    Know that, there, I shall remain,
    Waiting, just beyond the door.
    Morbid_Angel likes this.
  2. Morbid_Angel

    Morbid_Angel Sid the sloth

    they're beautiful and brutally honest lines, how could it not have worked? glad to know your relationship is back on track too

    reps coz i hope to be able to pull off something similar soon :grin:
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    hahah... Good luck with that...maybe mail it to her and wait...that should be enough to tip it over to your side.. ;)
    And thanks!
  4. mermaid

    mermaid New Member

    Nice One !!!
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Thanks dear!
  6. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    awesome lines horsey..
    soft and romantic...
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks buddy!

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