The World Of The Dead

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Asmodeus, Feb 11, 2005.

  1. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Hey... this was something I wrote a long, long time back... something Maiden fans would like, i think... I wrote it with them performing it in my mind... yeah, high hopes, eh???

    The World Of The Dead
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    You think that I'm dead
    As you come near
    Still coming forward
    I can smell the fear
    That I may awaken
    And slaughter your soul
    So why want the Devil
    For his bell to toll
    But being who you are
    Having no care
    Walking towards me
    Into my eyes you stare
    Your spine tingles
    Hair stands on end
    You hear a tinkle
    Or was it just your head
    Straighten yourself
    Yet feeling weird
    The pupils light up
    The breath is heard
    I regain my sight
    Blood flows in my veins
    You have no might
    I decide what's right
    "You should have fled
    When you had the chance;
    Now see how my lance
    Welcomes you to the World Of The Dead"
     
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  2. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    :nw: :nw: :nw: :nw:

    reps :p: reps :p:
     
  3. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Nice one, dude. Wanna see more from U.
     
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good one. Honestly speaking, I didnt like the other one, which most of the others liked more than this, but this one is very good. The last four lines are awesome. Very well ended. Keep it up.
     
  5. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Im dumbstruck.... dats about it... ntn else!
     
  6. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    well done...
     

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