The Warrior Of MonteZuma - Jay

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by jayanth, Dec 21, 2004.

  1. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Burnin Is all I see
    The jungle of Armia
    The bones, the blood
    The sight of a killing

    The Warriors Of Han
    The battle left none
    Rulers Head Roll
    Killing all but few

    So Near, So Far
    Life of Prance that lived
    The souls that split
    Often not felt, Not seen

    This day of history
    Marked by the victory
    Tribes Cheering
    The Great Warrior of MOTEZUMA
     
  2. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    This Poem is about the Tribes Of Montezuma and Armia..
     
  3. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice attempt, is this your first? Its more like a song lyric. Keep it up. :)
     
  4. Reem

    Reem Banned

    Nice jay... I liked it..

    I wrote something like that but still hesitant to post it.. will think about it..
     
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice one jay:)
     
  6. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Its not my first.. Its more than many.. I used to write on sheets of paper.. People used to just take it away from me.. But they all still have it..

    Anyways this is very very much inspired by Age Of Empires II - The Game.. I studied about the Montezuma only after seeing the Game stuff..
     
  7. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    I realized that, jay, as soon as I saw the title... why dontcha write a sequel about the european invasion of south america ?
     
  8. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    LOL.. I studied this man.. So i wrote it.. Whoi cares about European Invasion of SA.. I would Write more about the Indian Invasion..
     
  9. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    I said that coz in the game thats on of the interesting parts of the campaign, 'the warrior of montezuma' ( i don't remember his name) describing the spanish invasion of the aztec land.
     
  10. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Tenochitlan..... Mentezuma is his name and his tribes name...
     
  11. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Again a nice poem by Jay. It's cool......
     

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