The Wall

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Hardik, Apr 16, 2006.

  1. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    finally some activity from my side...:)
    i was discussing about this thing with my freind and we came up with this wall thing...have kept it very simple...see if you get the idea...


    i dont like it that much myself...colud have done it better...
    still some comments would be gr8:)
     
    Hardik, Apr 16, 2006
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  2. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Good effort dude! :)
    enigmatic poem?
     
    vini, Apr 16, 2006
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  3. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    no...simple analogy...thanks for reading..:)
     
    Hardik, Apr 16, 2006
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  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    nice poem after along time on IGT...like the theme
     
    walk_alone, Apr 17, 2006
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  5. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^glad u liked it...thanks 4 reading:)
     
    Hardik, Apr 17, 2006
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  6. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    when i first read the title, i thought it was about rahul dravid.....:grin:
    nice one.....liked it....the theme and the concept behind is really good....:nw:
    but as u urself said, it could have been better.....:beer:
     
    uj_6string, Apr 17, 2006
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  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^lol...never thought of that....Rahul Dravid..ha ha...
    neways,Thanks for checkin it out..:)
     
    Hardik, Apr 17, 2006
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  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice one indeed...!

    btw.. best luck for ur exams..
     
    nimisha, Apr 18, 2006
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  9. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    thanks 4 both..:):)
     
    Hardik, Apr 18, 2006
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  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i'm bad at thinking:eek::

    please pm me or post the explanation..
    jus wanna make sure i'm on the right track
     
    BubblyMartini, May 22, 2006
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