Watching time so closely As the moments passes me by Leaving behind all the deeds Some I want to forget, some I want to keep With each and every new moment Making me feel better Thinking its one more moment closer to the end. The end of a wait For something I don’t know Something I have never seen But something inside me keeps tellin’ It exists and I want it So, I wait and wait Racing to keep pace With the ticking of the clock As the seconds turn into minutes and minutes into hours Hope soars, and destination seems to be nearer And so with the next minute and the next hour It goes on and here I am Waiting for something I don’t even know For so long Eternity seems to be such a short time. Edit: (spelling correction) //Comments plz
Teach me how to be simple and to the point : this is good work dude! keep writing and post a song recording someday.. )
Great yaar!!! The thing is I too wrote one on waiting (though in a diff sense) few days back...shall post that soon...but, for sure, not a match for yours...Your's is Awesome!!!
@Bubbs .... thnx a lot... reg recording ,I sing like a crow u knw : ... so ... @Sharm ... thnx yaar. and yeah read your poem, it was good ...
