>>The Wait<<

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by apurbajd, Jun 12, 2006.

  1. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    Watching time so closely
    As the moments passes me by
    Leaving behind all the deeds
    Some I want to forget, some I want to keep
    With each and every new moment
    Making me feel better
    Thinking its one more moment closer to the end.

    The end of a wait
    For something I don’t know
    Something I have never seen
    But something inside me keeps tellin’
    It exists and I want it

    So, I wait and wait
    Racing to keep pace
    With the ticking of the clock
    As the seconds turn into minutes and minutes into hours
    Hope soars, and destination seems to be nearer
    And so with the next minute and the next hour

    It goes on and here I am
    Waiting for something I don’t even know
    For so long
    Eternity seems to be such a short time.

    Edit: (spelling correction)
    //Comments plz :)
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Goddamn brotha, goddamn, fine fine work. The last line drives home like a nail.
  3. #iR@


    AWESOME!! :nw:
  4. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    @dist... thanx brotha , u r always inspiring

    @Hira .. glad u liked it :) , thnx
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Teach me how to be simple and to the point :eek::
    this is good work dude!
    keep writing
    and post a song recording someday.. :eek:)
  6. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Great yaar!!!
    The thing is I too wrote one on waiting (though in a diff sense) few days back...shall post that soon...but, for sure, not a match for yours...Your's is Awesome!!!
  7. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    @Bubbs .... thnx a lot... reg recording ,I sing like a crow u knw :p: ... so ...

    @Sharm ... thnx yaar. and yeah read your poem, it was good ... :)
  8. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    ^ thanks apurbajd!

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