The Unleashed

Drifting Across the Abyss
See the anger, the rage
Flying across the trees
Silence that it is

The wise man's home
Thatched on the top
Far beneath his home
He saw the after goth

He said..
"He Shall arrive
He who shall slay
The Unleashed..
He who will protect
He who will lead"

Silence broken, Words
Flow down the River of
Tenuchitlan
There came the Saviour
The One

The thrust of swords heard
The beast now seen
Hurt, Hurt, Hurt
And Finally killed

The tribes feast
For the one who came
To kill the beast
The Great Warrior Of
Minotlian

 

Nice one jayanth Havent gotten stuff yet, still waiting

 

Nice one Jay.. but couldnt understand the meaning of Minotlian,, can u tell wats that?

 

Its another Tribe...

 

@ dist :- Stuff should reach you before friday.. Thanks..

 

oh yea.. and you have put up two threads with same thing...

 

I'll delete the other.. If you are talking about the other poem, they are completely different..

 

no i was talking about this same one.. any ways a nice poem.....

 

THanks Pal..

 

good writing jay..

 

Thanks Reem... These are all the stuff i wrote some time back.. Newer stuff are not this boring and gothic..

 

@ jayanth they are not boring.. it is good to have all types of peoms here.. i enjoyed reading it..

 

nice one jay...

 

nice work jay............

 

THanks People.. .

 

It's a wonder, Jayanth....