The Unleashed

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by jayanth, Dec 22, 2004.

  1. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Drifting Across the Abyss
    See the anger, the rage
    Flying across the trees
    Silence that it is

    The wise man's home
    Thatched on the top
    Far beneath his home
    He saw the after goth

    He said..
    "He Shall arrive
    He who shall slay
    The Unleashed..
    He who will protect
    He who will lead"

    Silence broken, Words
    Flow down the River of
    There came the Saviour
    The One

    The thrust of swords heard
    The beast now seen
    Hurt, Hurt, Hurt
    And Finally killed

    The tribes feast
    For the one who came
    To kill the beast
    The Great Warrior Of
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice one jayanth:) Havent gotten stuff yet, still waiting:)
  3. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    Nice one Jay.. but couldnt understand the meaning of Minotlian,, can u tell wats that?
  4. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Its another Tribe...
  5. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    @ dist :- Stuff should reach you before friday.. Thanks..
  6. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    oh yea.. and you have put up two threads with same thing...
  7. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    I'll delete the other.. If you are talking about the other poem, they are completely different..
  8. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    no i was talking about this same one.. any ways a nice poem.....
  9. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    THanks Pal..
  10. Reem

    Reem Banned

    good writing jay..
  11. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Thanks Reem... These are all the stuff i wrote some time back.. Newer stuff are not this boring and gothic..
  12. Reem

    Reem Banned

    @ jayanth they are not boring.. it is good to have all types of peoms here.. i enjoyed reading it..
  13. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice one jay...
  14. Natasia

    Natasia ...

    nice work jay............ :) :)
  15. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    THanks People.. .
  16. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    It's a wonder, Jayanth....

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