THE SWEETEST REASON~my 4th Poem(after a long time)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vini, Oct 8, 2005.

  1. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Its been ages since i wrote any poem..i've just written 3 poems in my life and this is my 4th one..this is dedicated to my beloved 8 months old Niece>>
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    The Sweetest Reason


    Your tears are wiped by a soft li'l hand
    The tired spirit loosens when back from errand
    See a three teethed smile and dare the worries stand!

    I stare at you without a blink, Oh my li'l babe asleep
    These sweet memoirs of you my dear, i'll always cherish & keep

    I wake from slumber every morn to see a dimpled cheek
    If you're not there as my reason for living, i'd rather not wake from sleep

    I do keep living in this wicked fateless world as you're there in my next room
    Because i know i'll come tomorrow with moist eyes but you'll lift me from gloom

    So i wish i could tell you, you're my reason for living
    I love you so much..thats why i'm still believing

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    here is the pic of my niece if u wanna see>>

    http://img359.imageshack.us/my.php?image=neha2cb.jpg

    tahda!!
     
  2. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    ur poetry is sweet..
    ur niece is even sweeter..:)
    she is very cute ...
     
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ur love 4 ur niece really shows though this poem.. loved it :)

    she's sooo cute!
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    a veryyyyyy sweet poem........ make sure she reads it once she grows up! HOW SWEET YAAR....... she is very cute!
     
  5. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hihi...thankyou so much guys!! :grin:

    @#iR@
    m surely gonna do that

    ps-i'll pass on ur compliments abt my niece to her mom for sure
     
  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    the poem is inddeed sweet......and anyone who has such a lovely niece will write such a sweet poem..kudos to u vini........and my sweet kisses for ur little cute niece........
     
  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    b-e-a-utiful:)......very sweeeet poem......i think you should write more vini...:)
     
  8. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    one word :: genuine
    one smiley :: :rock:
     
  9. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful lines vini...

    Keep it up!
    And write often..

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  10. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    The poem you wrote shows the love you have for your niece.
    And she is really cute and cuddly.
     
  11. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thanx a lot for appreciation guys!!

    i love to write poems..but i always get this dilemma.. "what to write about?" heehe..and yes thanx for encouraging me to write more :)
     
  12. J.J

    J.J The Guitar God

    write me some lyrics for a songggg lol...very nice 10/10 rock on!
     
  13. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    @ JJ

    thanx a lot...as for lyrix i dont think im that much of an expert..can give it a try though :p:
     
  14. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    very nice work....
     
  15. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Sis.. ur poem is as sweet as u r..

    u ppl know onething.. when i saw pic of vini.. with her niece.. i thought she is married and having a kid.. their faces r so similar.. :p:
     
  16. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    haaha..ur not alone
    quite a dozen of people here think shez my daughter..buhaha

    i dont mind though, if people think m married.
    Sooo gud4me ;)
     
  17. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    LMAO ...

    kinda true
     
  18. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    told ya :grin:
     
  19. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Shweet! ;)

    Hey!!
    do write more poems babe..
    you write well
    and your niece is really very cute..

    Know what?!
    You could frame this poem with her picture and gift it to her mom...
    its worth being put on display..:)
     
  20. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thankyou soooooooooo much martina..
     

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