The Sun

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by esgallindeion, Jan 1, 2006.

  1. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    The Sun

    See the sun in all its might
    A golden blob, a roaring sight
    See the disdain in his smile
    Friendly faked and full of guile
    Pretentious is his lies
    But brings hope to mournful skies
    In hiding like a beast of prey
    My stars he hunts all through the day
    Yet in majesty does he rule
    Time and space and heaven his stool.
     
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  2. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Nice short poem mate :beer: Nice to see your poetry threads back
     
  3. PakPride

    PakPride New Member

    sounds professional...curse u and ur skills!...
    :)
     
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    :nw: amazing as always :nw:
     
  5. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Thank you, people.
     
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    too good..
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    "Pretentious in his lies
    But brings hope to mournful skies"
    very good...
     

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