The Stone

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ~Bish, Jun 18, 2007.

  1. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Hi All,

    After a loong time thot 2 write sumthing again.. ur comments n compliments will b my inspiration....

    Just Standing here since ages
    I have seen the turning pages
    The heroes of so called history
    The myths of evolving mystery

    U can lean on me when you feel alone
    And then kick me when you r on ur own
    still i don't mind the way u treat
    coz I am a dumb stone of your street

    winters pass by summers make me cry
    but you can feel my face its always dry
    if you try to hit me hard i will hurt you
    but if you hide beside me i will protect you

    I am a dumb stone but i still feel the pain
    can't you see me crying in the pouring rain
    there is nothing that i can give or offer anyone
    but I can promise to be there when there is no one

    I Remember the last spring when I saw her
    tears rolling over her face she came here
    poeple of our species are not permitted
    but still did a crime to love her and admitted

    Leaning on me she cried that whole night
    first time the stone was pity on his plight
    was able to feel the hair covering her wet face
    I was feeling like a looser in a lost race

    you humans have the privilage to break hearts
    but why the **** we don't have beating hearts
    God,make me a human once i won't ask again
    let me kiss her forhead and relieve her pain

    the rays of smiling sun woke her up it was early morn
    what I felt best was soon going to turn my worst dawn
    mentally lost was the expression on her confused face
    She resembled an innocent bird entrapped in a cage

    soon a small knife was shinning in front of my eyes
    blood popped out of her wrist veins like melted ice
    Do you know why was not able to stop her doing that shit ?
    becoz I was a ****ing stone standing helplessly at her street

    Let me tell u nothing has changed since that day
    still people spit on my face while walking the way
    I am happy the way I am atleast no heart to hurt
    But one can still see on me red dry blood and dirt

    i'm_not_neo and #iR@ like this.
  2. #iR@


    OMG! bro dat as AMAZING... i didnt know u could rite SOOOOOOO WELL or i think i havent read ur stuff before... that was :nw: reps if allowed... man that was ONE awesome poem... honestly...
  3. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    WOW Bish that is a masterpiece...literally are seriously evolving as a poet (what from Office Orgasm to The Stone) and I hope you keep it up..

    This one was just beautiful..reps in no way shows how much I appreciate this one..

  4. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    waaah....bhai..... !!.dat..was.a..grr8 1...!!!....
    felt..lik..u actually..gone...thru all dat..phase..... bout my past... :( ...

    its verry nice..!!

    take care..!!
    keep posting.!
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    do i need to repeat everything what all above people said!!!
    anyways.. u always know wat i mean!!!!;)
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    u knw i dont think this was good poem...cause i dont even think that thngs can think this way..
    stone is u feel ...cause i cant
    stones r the most valuable shining immortal things ...tell u what happened..
    monsoons come and clean the stones ...nothing reamains !!
  7. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    ^ whott?????????..!!
  8. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    guyz my eyes r wet.. i seriously mean that... never thot one day i can write so well that ppl will like it so much.. u guyz rock..

    thanx all for the love and reps u guyz gave 2 me n my poems.. i m telling again i m not a poet.. it just happened.. n sometimes i also surprise myself..
  9. new2guitar

    new2guitar New Member


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