hey vini, bring on the newbie back....tht was good yaar...have to search for these 4 letters now.........strain my eyez like i did for the dp........ @ cryptu, tht finger reminds me of the MERCURY VILLIAN in terminator 1.............he also does the same way......
Boy!.... did I tease u too much abt ur username Vini????? : guess I did it only twice and u changed ur name .... :shock: :shock: :shock: ...... neway.... I liked the old one..... nice poem though.........
this thread seems to be my edited username related thread and guys dont ask me to bring the newbie back again, coz now im not a newbie at guitar anyway now cut it plz!! 201 views :sadbye:
@esgallindeion no two people think alike, look alike, write alike. And so we all have different styles. However if you were indirectly attempting to criticise. Then ur most welcome. Plz drop in again @Amanush When we have such a good poet like u..ofcourse it rubs on! thanx a bunch !
but ur style of criticism is undescriptive Hence inept : ps- my style of criticism is expository unlike urs so kindly criticise in clear words next time, mere expression of disliking is futile! but no grudges :grin:
Your accusation pains me. So I shall take another look. Well.. you have a unique style that is quite interesting and refreshing. On first look, I took it on face value - a poem dedicated to shadows (is that how you meant it?) but I guess you can think of a shadow as being someone so close to you that mere terms like "wife", "friend", "family" is lacking... someone like a soulmate. I particularly like the shortening of lines... brings in an effect of something closing in on you (death approaching) which is the final parting of shadows... What I first meant by not my style was simply that the pattern unnerved me a bit... But on reading again especially with the second interpretation, it seemed right.
wow! im glad reps for ur interpretation and for enlightening me..do keep dropping in in my poem threads. thanx man!
