the phase.....poetry

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Sep 28, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    i am posting my poetry remembering the hardest days in my job atmosphere..which cud have been disastrous for me..last year on 9 sept 2004...the situation still makes me tremble

    when the going is tough,
    and days are rough.
    feel somewhere,
    almighty is there.
    looking at you,
    with the passionate cue.
    showering the care,
    and saying belive HIM
    everything will be ok as its due and for you..

    for us...the hard times is the teaching,
    for is the way of preaching

  2. shak

    shak Harrr!

    well its good that you found faith in someone ..
    nice poem ..
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    yeah....really nice Rohit (thats ur name if m not wrong..)
    as they say...Tough times dont last...but tough people do :beer:
  4. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks to all.........who belive the unknown power
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey Rohit... another nice poem...short 'n sweet..
    Glad you have a strong faith in God....
    and dude...
    a lil bit of advice...
    dont let the past affect your present..aint good for your future!.. ;)

    Good luck!
  6. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    good advice...but practicality is better far from reality where we works different way ryt dude...infact it was my imagination and credit to almighty pushing my limit...


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